The thing that bugged me the most was the colours you used, they were not that pleasant to look at.
On the other hand the animation was good, the voice acting wasn't to bad and the story seemed average. It had some parts where it made me smile but not really laugh out loud material, but i'd say your going in the right direction.
Overall it was a decent flash, so keep up the good work.
I really enjoyed this animation, the voices are spot on in my opinion.
Couldn't help but laughing when Ash told brock his tunes sucked, haha, that was grand!
I thinking about youtube poops all the way through this episode.
I love those!
I liked it, even-though i'm not into creepy games, I just can't help it but let my curiosity get the best of me. The mood was pretty unsettling and creepy, it kinda made me wary of every step I would make.
It gave me some Yume Nikki vibes . . . perhaps you know this game?
Cause I recall one of the songs also to be one i heard in Yume Nikki.
Real great job on this game, it had me on the edge of my seat sir!
This is very good.
Its educative in some way, also a nice way to train blind typing in a fun and entertaining way. I liked the retro japanese style. Really nice style. I hope I'll see more of these in the future.
Omg hentai <3
lol that was the best ever lol xD make more of these xDDDD
It's been a while since i listened to one of your songs.
I've always been a fan of glitchy sounds and soothing songs.
The combination of these two in this song has a real nice result.
Gives me a somewhat nostalgic feel.
Really loving the part with the guitar by the way!
Keep doing what your doing man cause its great!
Thanks a lot man, I really appreciate the words.
I'll be doing this for a long time. :)
I realy like your style of music with all the glitchy sounds and all.
I just recently "discovered" your music and yea, what can I say, i'm hooked.
Keep up the great work man, I'll be waiting with anticipation for your next songs to come.
Hey man! Thats really awesome that you just sort of stumbled upon my stuff. I'm glad you enjoy my sound. Might have some new songs coming soon. Well, not for a while, i'm working on an intense track right now that probably wont be done for a while. However! I have some recent tracks up though. Give'm a listen : D
Thanks for your ears.
Definatly funny stuff, don't know why, must be the funny background noises.
Awesome, always fan of your trippy vibrant images.
But the teeth seem in the wrong perspective, especially the upper row doesn't seem right.
Technique is good, also like the atmosphere of this piece in overall.
The left eye looks really flat though, maybe there should have been some shadow in the eye white to fix that. And the fingers look a bit wonky at some spots but now i'm kind of nitpicking.
it's a good piece though, keep it up!
Thank you for constructive criticism, I'm glad that you liked the piece :)
Loving the technique of this piece, the texture of the skin is marvelous.
It doesn't seem to work for the hair though, it looks kind of flat.
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